the voice ruins it!
"Here's what you need to do to get better.
Read some classic books.
Watch some classic films (not just animated ones).
Do life drawing.
Read some philosophy.
Get off your computer and have some real life experience.
Keep a diary."
That's just bullcrap, do it ORIGINAL. if you read a book and then make a film, how original would that make it? you would just steal stuff from the book and remake it. how would a diary help you make a fantasy story? our world is just sadnes and destruction. movies make it even more un-original
just do it as you've always done it. without voices, you wouldnt even have needed a voice actor. but my points goes to the animation itself, great graphics, great effects 5/10
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